Hospital Corridor Emotional Scene

the prompt

Testing lighting, "camera language," and subtle human emotion. 
Lighting: Cool hospital daylight, soft gray window light, slight green medical tint. 
Color Palette: Soft gray, muted blue, pale green, tired skin tones. 
Cut 1: A hospital corridor at dawn. A father rushes toward a pediatric room in office clothes, tie loosened, crushed flowers in hand. 
Cut 2: Through the doorway, he sees his daughter asleep with an IV; his wife sits beside the bed, exhausted. 
Cut 3: He freezes at the threshold, guilt flooding his face. She looks up and says nothing. 
Cut 4: The daughter wakes and whispers, “Did you miss it?” 
Cut 5: He kneels by the bed, tears in his eyes. “Not this.” 
Cut 6: The girl reaches for both parents; they meet over her hand in silence.